Tuesday, 1 November 2016

My simale

I enjoyed righting my poem . I found it very easy and calming. I thought a fairy would be a good subject since it is a well known fantasy creature and I love fantasy. I like the way it turned out espesily the way they only know it is a fairy at the end . For me righting is fun espesily when I'm aloud to choose the subject and poems are one of my favorite ways to right out what your feeling .
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Monday, 29 August 2016

Hippo diary

Hippo diary 

15 May after school

Betsy is very happy surprisingly my parents quite like her and got an extra old mattress for her to sleep on .  I tried to feed her onions she seemed to like them , I think . She really likes it when I spray her with the hose she seems to be really intelligent. I can call her name and she responds to it after one day . I love bestie being around even if the neighbors  don't really agree  but there children Bobby and Lundy really like her. She's really friendly and has not  hurt anybody .

16 May

I woke up to bestie by the side of my bed watching me sleep . Her gigantic nose sniffed me as I awoke. Betsy looked at me as if to say good morning. She grunted happily . "Bestie let's see what food you like!" I said excitedly . Bestie seems to love Water melon she ate the whole thing and half of my share and my grandmas. She's a cheeky one like me . It's Saturday so I didn't  have to go to school. I took bestie for a walk well she took me for one. We got back home to see my mom and dad had acidly got a pool for bestie . There were builders busy making it. My mum said I had to clean the pool when it's dirty . I agreed and bestie looked over the moon happy. Then I fed her and ate lunch . I and Betsy fell asleep after that . 

17 May 

I woke up to bestie liking the chocolate I had last night of my face. I mean ewww . I didn't mind though she at least let me sleep till 8.00 . I fed her some green beans today  she needed a lot of green beans to fill her up and one water melon. My parents said we may keep her . Betsy let out a grunt of happiness . We went to go see how the pool was coming along and all we needed to do was fill it with water. So I used the hose on Betsy to clean her and then she took me for another walk she seems to follow me home so I'm fine with her dragging me along . She loves our neighbors and they love riding her and she seems to like them on her back. We got back and my dad was filling the pool up . I fed Betsy more water melon and some onions then she fell asleep on her old mattress. I put a blanket on her as her eyes slowly closed . That's what happens these last few days I really enjoyed them and I'm sure il get used to Betsy liking my face in the morning eventually .



Wednesday, 8 June 2016

The Eagle

The eagle gracefully glides while he glances at the valley below. His eyes lock on a trembling mouse hiding in the grass. He swooped down clutching the unsuspecting mouse in his claws.The mouse squirming and squealing for his life but soon all was quit the mouse took his last breath and closed his eyes.


I wrote this about an eagle because I love the way they fly 
I loved this project because I love writing espesily how I can loos myself in my fantacy.
I did not find it hard at all I am verry happy with creative writing and verry fluent when I'm aloud free will.

Tuesday, 31 May 2016

Doris's life in an informal settelment

I am Doris and I live I a informal settelment. My house is made from scrap mettle and around here we all as in all our naighbers all share a porta potty as I like to call the their actually called portable toilets 

I wake up freezing in bed with my little sister Lilly and my mom Fiona .  We don't get to see my dad a lot mom says he's away at work but I don't think that's why he's gone. I'm just happy I've got a verry supportive and loving mother . I always here about kids who have mom who doesn't give them enough  support or their mom or dad  is an alcoholic or just abandon them on the street. I am very glad my mom is not one of those . I am also glad my sister and I  get along most of the time. 

We have little food but luckily my mom planted an apple seed manny years ago when there weren't so many shack holding up space  and we have lots of apples when it Apple season. We usely say hi to our neighbors there's a  nice boy my age who lives there. We would always walk down the streets together. His name is Babalo weird name but who am I to judge. We love going down to a school called Elkanah it's an ekspensive school so we don't go there. Actually we don't go to school. Even though our mothers both work very hard but they still can't earn enough money to send us to school . If we're lucky our friend Lola will give us some food over the school wall .

It may sound like a nice place to live from my perspective but it's not there are many dangers for us here like deseises or floods and don't get me started on starvation . I dread my shack catching on fire or burg elders in the night I try to forget the horde things over here and try to have a good life will I'm here and try to stay positive because I believe that if I stay happy so will the world .


Friday, 22 April 2016

Aparis diary

Hello diary its me Apari , I need to talk to you about something

Today the singing inspector came ,he was scary. For some resion he was dressed funny but no one dared laugh . He had stockings on, a striped shirt ,huge knickerbockers and a thick jacket he looked like a hunter come to hunt us down BANG and death. Enough about wat he looks like and on to the terrifying story. He walked in and called us all to the hall except those lucky pants people who only do tests and don't sing anyhow he made us sing Doh Ray Me excetra. This is the moment I no test he is Mr Meany Pants well not really his real name is Roland but he says were only aloud to call him Mr Roland . On to the story. Everyone knows that I have a really really high voice not like helium balloon but almost there. He made me sing the lowest of al notes *DUN DUN DAA*. He also made the boys sing a very verry verry high note I can't sing with my high voice My high voice that I can't hit that note surprisingly they did it but they were literally screetch ping like clotures

oops gotta go moms calling think he will come back hope not Bye.

Thursday, 3 March 2016

My BFF and I had a Inter-grated learning test

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My BFF, Jess, and I were really excited because we were  actually partners! Any how, we were meant to think of a soil creature and guess  what we chose? The same creature! A Mongoose #best creature ever. we made a poster of the mongoose. Even if there were some tears  and fights it was still pretty fun.Remind me not to work with Jess again. were good friends but not good work buddies. we also did a oral. I got to pretend I was a mongoose and she  was my owner (you can have a mongoose as a pet).we presented it in front of the whole class. Then every one knew how dangerous but cute mongooses can be. That's  pretty much it  but I loved every second of it.

Thursday, 28 January 2016

Brand new blog yay !

i am very exited about my new blog and i am happy to blog with every one for the year