The Eagle

The eagle gracefully glides while he glances at the valley below. His eyes lock on a trembling mouse hiding in the grass. He swooped down clutching the unsuspecting mouse in his claws.The mouse squirming and squealing for his life but soon all was quit the mouse took his last breath and closed his eyes.

I wrote this about an eagle because I love the way they fly 

I loved this project because I love writing espesily how I can loos myself in my fantacy.

I did not find it hard at all I am verry happy with creative writing and verry fluent when I'm aloud free will.

Doris's life in an informal settelment

I am Doris and I live I a informal settelment. My house is made from scrap mettle and around here we all as in all our naighbers all share a porta potty as I like to call the their actually called portable toilets 

I wake up freezing in bed with my little sister Lilly and my mom Fiona .  We don't get to see my dad a lot mom says he's away at work but I don't think that's why he's gone. I'm just happy I've got a verry supportive and loving mother . I always here about kids who have mom who doesn't give them enough  support or their mom or dad  is an alcoholic or just abandon them on the street. I am very glad my mom is not one of those . I am also glad my sister and I  get along most of the time. 

We have little food but luckily my mom planted an apple seed manny years ago when there weren't so many shack holding up space  and we have lots of apples when it Apple season. We usely say hi to our neighbors there's a  nice boy my age who lives there. We would always walk down the streets together. His name is Babalo weird name but who am I to judge. We love going down to a school called Elkanah it's an ekspensive school so we don't go there. Actually we don't go to school. Even though our mothers both work very hard but they still can't earn enough money to send us to school . If we're lucky our friend Lola will give us some food over the school wall .

It may sound like a nice place to live from my perspective but it's not there are many dangers for us here like deseises or floods and don't get me started on starvation . I dread my shack catching on fire or burg elders in the night I try to forget the horde things over here and try to have a good life will I'm here and try to stay positive because I believe that if I stay happy so will the world .

Aparis diary

Hello diary its me Apari , I need to talk to you about something

Today the singing inspector came ,he was scary. For some resion he was dressed funny but no one dared laugh . He had stockings on, a striped shirt ,huge knickerbockers and a thick jacket he looked like a hunter come to hunt us down BANG and death. Enough about wat he looks like and on to the terrifying story. He walked in and called us all to the hall except those lucky pants people who only do tests and don't sing anyhow he made us sing Doh Ray Me excetra. This is the moment I no test he is Mr Meany Pants well not really his real name is Roland but he says were only aloud to call him Mr Roland . On to the story. Everyone knows that I have a really really high voice not like helium balloon but almost there. He made me sing the lowest of al notes *DUN DUN DAA*. He also made the boys sing a very verry verry high note I can't sing with my high voice My high voice that I can't hit that note surprisingly they did it but they were literally screetch ping like clotures

oops gotta go moms calling think he will come back hope not Bye.

My BFF and I had a Inter-grated learning test

My BFF, Jess, and I were really excited because we were  actually partners! Any how, we were meant to think of a soil creature and guess  what we chose? The same creature! A Mongoose #best creature ever. we made a poster of the mongoose. Even if there were some tears  and fights it was still pretty fun.Remind me not to work with Jess again. were good friends but not good work buddies. we also did a oral. I got to pretend I was a mongoose and she  was my owner (you can have a mongoose as a pet).we presented it in front of the whole class. Then every one knew how dangerous but cute mongooses can be. That's  pretty much it  but I loved every second of it.

Brand new blog yay !

i am very exited about my new blog and i am happy to blog with every one for the year